I wrote this a while ago but never thought about posting it up.I'm in the what-the-heck-why-not kinda mood.
I love this post and wanted to write something similar.
Here goes nothing:
Dear Disappointment
You're always present when I least expect you to be
I try to warn myself to be prepared
But I'm always crushed when you come barging in
Uninvited
Dear Pain
Everytime you visit, I know it'll hurt
But despite the frequency of how often you're here
It's always magnified by how bored I am to see you
Once again
Dear Optimism
You disappeared for a while
And while you were gone
I eloped with pessimism
Atleast I'm forewarned and stronger
For now
Dear Happiness
You come with the hugest rush
And leave so abruptly
It makes me smile when I think how naive I am
Your visits are quick but appreciated
So very much
Will you come again?
Dear Heart
It's got to stop because it's not normal
We have tried as a body
But you refuse to co operate
It's grossly unfair that we have to suffer
Collectively
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Superb....
my o my, now this is something i am getting inspired by!
woohoooo
thank you so much :D
whaoooo! awesomee!
Liked heart's dilemma much.
As a whole I sincerely, personally think you should not have published this 'nothing'. (No offense.)
Umer Tur Care to elaborate why?
I personally believe not to grieve. And what is most important is self-realization, which lies in intellectual contemplation.
I agree with you but I also believe that when you grieve and regret for the past, you rectify your actions for the future.
Contemplation can't always be intellectual, we're humans with emotions which often do override our rationality.
woah!!!!
its like you have spoken the thoughts for me...liked your concept and its truly something i wish i had written :$ ehehe
well done!
Mubi hahah, that sentiment sounds familiar!
;)
I LIKE !!! I LIKE !!!
An interesting play with personification!
Forgive my ignorance here but the one addressed to 'Heart' I did not quite get...
Id it is Thanks. It's how sometimes rationailty and your brain's telling your heart to simply let go and move on because the pain it feels when it keeps holding on to previous grievances.
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I thought I should just check out your blog, after you posted a comment on mine =)
Brilliant post, bdw!
Thanks HFM; now it all comes together:)
That's sooo beautiful!!
And you write well.
Keep writing!
Cheers!
S.
cheeeky!!!
you write so Bollywood-ish...
but good bollywood.
don't suffer.
die quick!! :D
love and hugs.
N
WOrd Ver: ambsossl
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The Future Mantra
I like this poem, it's so true
I was wondering what would they say back...
Dear Rain drop drinker
How is it that you want so much
but care not for what u have
u wanted the alsatian
but even labradors are good pets
-Disappointment
Every time i leave u
i hope u have learnt
that life can be simple
but then ure fears, egos and desires
and i come back, once again
-Pain
I try and do my best
but there are so many to give co.
I just hope that the days i am busy
u find in ureself the belief
which makes me, me
-Optimism
I am always there
never leave
what can i do
If some days
u just don't enjoy candy
-Happiness
I beat for and with you buttercup
Why else do you think they put me there
Don't worry when thigs make us flutter
that's jst how its meant to be
-Heart
inspiring!
very inspiring :)
Thankyou people.
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