let's frolic in the fields and let our worries fly
sit beneath the moon and watch the comets pass us by
take my hand and purr a content sigh
as a soft breeze caresses my cheek under the blue sky
privately I smile and ponder why
the wheels of fate turned to spy
my happiness.
16 raindrops:
let's to rise again...
i wanna rise in this.. i wanna feel this and now all i feel is numb :(
Congratulations! You’ve been awarded! Lucky you. :]
Falak
(Btw, this post totally rocks!)
may the happiness stays =)
i wish u always remain happy =) !!
amazing way to put it..may this happiness last for quite a while =)
Cute :)
nice !!
spying.......happiness.
neat thought.
ps:thanks for your comments and correction.
Beautifully written :)
P.S: You on my blogroll !
:(
Fate, huh
why the sad face?
:)
this made me smile.
thank you. <3
*smiles*
this is so beautiful.... :) loved it. loved your blog.. will keep comin..
purr a content sigh - You do realise Mali's cat is evil :D
but seriously, I love your short poems; you write from the heart and capture motions beautifully! :)
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