tarnished memory
brilliant symmetry
expressive eyes
laughing cries
knifed edges
silly pledges
hurried conversations
forgotten recollections
jittery nerves
smooth curves
lazy smiles
turbulent trials
cream+butter
sweet as another
jack+jill
tumbling off the hill
brilliant symmetry
expressive eyes
laughing cries
knifed edges
silly pledges
hurried conversations
forgotten recollections
jittery nerves
smooth curves
lazy smiles
turbulent trials
cream+butter
sweet as another
jack+jill
tumbling off the hill
9 raindrops:
ooohhh witty!
Nice! But i wonder what you were thinking of when you wrote this. I thought of school and friends. Fits so perfectly with my memories of that place... :D
Awesome. And it rhymes unlike my poems, so even better!
;)
T
great rhyming
I'm liking it!
I like it!
Makes me think of the mayhem that's surrounding me right now.
Have a nice summer! =)
That was awesome.. and especially the las verse =D
good one
http://concerningmjk.blogspot.com/2008/08/im-going-to-be-smiley-old-man-who.html
thanks for the sweet comments on my muslim stuff blog :)
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