witness

25 Jul 2009

You're walking into a large room, the lights are dimmed and flicker ever so slightly. Your eyes squint a little as they have come from the brightness of outside, you can't help but notice the smoky haze that seems to have enveloped the occupants of the room.
It's quiet but the comfortable silence you've never really understood well. Heads raise as you accidently slam the door on your way in, they nod in your direction absent mindedly, nobody seems to care much you're here, either way- you're a witness to what's to happen here.

10 raindrops:

Americanising Desi said...

being a helpless witness is just not my kinda deal!

falakk said...

O_O

You must write more! Don't leave us hanging! Please? The suspense is killing me!

Love,
Falak

misspecs said...

Awesome!! I loved it!

outcastrebelchic said...

So what is going to happen there?
Write more!

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

hmm... interesting write up :-)

rain girl said...

me likes!:)

hfm said...

I don't know what comes next, maybe that's the beauty of the future: it's so mysterious.

Nothingman said...

I bet they kill the witness and eat her.

N

hfm said...

And then feed the bones to the bears in the back garden?

~*~ Jal Pari ~*~ said...

Very nice. Keep penning!